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GMAT写作用词用句5个注意要点实例解读

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摘要:GMAT作文想要取得高分,除了对文章整体结构的把握和了解,在遣词造句上也有不少值得注意的地方。下面就为大家介绍一些GMAT写作高分的小技巧,结合实例改写帮助大家在词汇运用方法有所提升。 避免使用语意弱的be动词 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如: 原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. 改写:The brown

   GMAT作文想要取得高分,除了对文章整体结构的把握和了解,在遣词造句上也有不少值得注意的地方。下面就为大家介绍一些GMAT写作高分的小技巧,结合实例改写帮助大家在词汇运用方法有所提升。

  避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:

  原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

  改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:

  1) 原文:The team members are good players.

  改写:The team members play well.

  2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

  改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:

  1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion.

  改写:No opportunity for promotion exists.

  2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered.

  改写:The books you ordered have arrived.

  多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

  例如:

  1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk.

  改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、原文:She is a careful shopper.

  改写:She compares prices and quality.

  尽量运用主动语态

  例如:

  1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity.

  改写:Charity has supported the organization.

  2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

  例如:

  1、原文:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  改写:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  2、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

  改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

  3、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  4、原文:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

  改写:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

  杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

  例如:

  1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

  改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

  2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

  改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

  以上就是关于GMAT写作中如何通过一些遣词造句的小技巧提升作文水平的内容介绍,结合实例进行讲解,相信会对大家的写作提分有所帮助。

 

 

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